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    Average 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Dryhill
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    Sep 23, 2012 | 
   
   
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        A little bit more about the characters emotions (yes we know the writer was hesitant about the lesbianism b ut was she shaking with fear, did she have buttewrflies in her stomache?) would have been nice. Do write some more about these three, do they eventually live together? (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Elkor
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    Dec 21, 2007 | 
   
   
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        While the diary writing style is interesting, but more as a summary than a story itself. It lacks depth to really capture the reader.  This would be a good "Chapter 0" where each Chapter is a more detailed accounting of the entries in Chapter 0.   (6/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Rocky
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    Dec 15, 2007 | 
   
   
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        This one has a lot of potential, and I'd like to see you continue.  Personally, I like the writing style; it's very readable, and I prefer it to the "Dear Diary" format. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Dec 15, 2007 | 
   
   
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        the story was ok, enjoyable to read only wish you had not done it in a diary or journa;l style wrtiting, but ever aurthor has their own style (6/10) 
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