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    Manx
    
    Author: Kanashin
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    (Added on Jul 27, 2000)
            (This month 264506 readers) (Total 316424 readers) | 
   
   
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    David's father left him 150 million dollars but he has to be a good boy to his young stepmother. And she made him obey her every order. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Hombre
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    Aug 2, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Over 30 chapters, each one a little more intense than the previous. Liked the 'punishment points' system. (9/10) 
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    Lori     | 
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    Aug 26, 2000 | 
   
   
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        Great Story look forward to the upcoming chapters.  Gives me great ideas for my submissive boyfriend (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Aug 1, 2000 | 
   
   
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        Liked the story. Inventive (7/10) 
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    dave     | 
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    Jul 31, 2000 | 
   
   
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        The author is too preoccupied with numbers and the violence is a bit too harsh. (2/10) 
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