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Our Beloved Son
Author: MasterD
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(Added on Nov 7, 2006)
(This month 21259 readers) (Total 35138 readers) |
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All parents love their son, but some types of love are strange. The growth of a boy with special powers. A twist on the standard incest stories as the child is the one who enslaves his parents. There are three voices in this story, hopefully, the different type styles will indicate the different voices. Please read to the end of the story for an explanation of why. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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i really enjoyed this story! i did not have any trouble following it, even though it is written in "not the usual" style. the only thing i had a problem with was beloved Mickeys age. for me it would have been better if he had been about 15. BUT it is Your story, and i look forward to more chapters.
respectfully blu (8/10)
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- Replied by:
masterdw
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2006)
- Thanks. I gave great thought to Mickey's age. I decided to have him a mature 12, because I wanted his sister to be pre- adolescent, and I wanted his parents to be influenced by Mickey's pre-verbal desire not to have any more competition for his parents attention. I also thought him being only 12 would add to the humiliation. His parents are fully conscious of what they are doing. They cannot help but do what Mickey wants. I'm going to play with that more. Again, thanks for taking the time to review. I will make some changes to chapter one, and add chapter two, sometime this week.
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| Reviewer:
longsong
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Nov 9, 2006 |
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Great start,cant wait for the rest (9/10)
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- Replied by:
masterdw
(Edit) (Nov 10, 2006)
- Thank you. While differen opinions make horse racing, I really did noy understand MKMSE problem. Now that I know that somebody liked it, I'll get started on chapter 2.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 7, 2006 |
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i did not find anything really hoti nthis and the chaging of the fonts towrds the end was not a good idea to hard to read (5/10)
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- Replied by:
masterdw
(Edit) (Nov 7, 2006)
- I am not going to comment on the substance of the review. Obvioulsy, I think the story is incredibly hot or I would not have written it. However, there was no change in type style, and when I repost, to correct some typographical errors, I will label the speakes. There was a constant switching from Mother to Father, which I hoped would be made clear by the change in type style. The son has the final word in the last three or four paragraphs. Perhaps you could not follow who was speaking and that is why you did not enjoy the story,
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