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Mistress Wife Patricia
Author: cissykandi
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(Added on Jul 11, 2006)
(This month 49506 readers) (Total 76808 readers) |
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Wife turns her chauvinistic husband into a sissy slut cross-dressing whore. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Tcheser
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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The story seems to have promise, but it seems rushed and the grammar and syntax is very bad. (4/10)
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Millie
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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You need to work on your grammar, punctuation and spelling. I would like to read the whole thing, but without those improvements it is almost impossible to read. If you do work on this story I will definitely give it another chance. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
dkelly1110
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Jul 11, 2006 |
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first person mixed with third person. confusing. (3/10)
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