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Bound To Order Author: Anne Gray
(Added on May 14, 2006) (This month 18981 readers) (Total 45799 readers)

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Number of Ratings: 8
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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Jun 18, 2010
A few to many spelling errors for my liking but then i am picky. This story line has been told many, many times but i like the attention to detail (what she was wearing and her crying, spoiling her make up) this helps make the story seem more realistic. (8/10)

Reviewer: Kira (Edit) Rating: Dec 16, 2006
Thanks for this nice story.
Could it be possible to see an second part of Your story here? (9/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: May 24, 2006
Usually, I don't read through all of Anne Gray's stories, anymore. This is because I find them a bit dry - clinical. However, this tale was not so clinical. It had a solid feel and flow. The story was erotic and rather well told. That's the long way to go about saying that I liked this tale. Unfortunately, there were more technical errors than usual; a few odd sentences and phrasings made me retrace my steps. Also, I would have liked to see the story go on a bit longer, exploring the emotional and physical tortures the girl would be going through. Perhaps a second chapter would be in order? (8/10)

Reviewer: Mistress M (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2006
Good premise and it was unique. You could use an editor to clean up the punctuation and grammar. Keep writing, your work will get better and better. (7/10)
Replied by: Mistress M (Edit) (May 19, 2006)
Thank you Ms. Gray for alerting me to your reply and I re-read your story a second time. I didn't elaborate on the things I liked about your story. I liked the tone and style, in effect, the expression of what was going on inside the head and actions of the protagonist. I also searched for the 22 stories you published on this site, to see what you've produced in the past, but cannot locate them. Perhaps you can supply a link. I still stand by my original comments, but raised your score by one point. *I stand corrected on the 22 stories. They DO appear.

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: May 15, 2006
A very fine beginning, but slow, slow start. A little too much into the fashion directions about the storyteller's costume. Othewise, certainly up to the standard you have set for your stories. (7/10)
Replied by: ThisGirl (Edit) (May 16, 2006)
Sometimes details can be boring and make things drag, but in this case, I really loved it! I loved getting such a clear image in my mind of how she must have looked- and I think she looked great- I think her outfit added to the mood of the story as well the development of the mistress' character.
Just wanted to add my two cents- nothing personal agains chksng19's review.
Replied by: Anne Gray (Edit) (May 19, 2006)
Thank you ThisGirl for defending that important aspect of my story. I would have done it myself but, despite having 22 stories published here with an average 8.5 rating, as you and Mistress M point out in your own reviews my poor grammar and spelling would obviously not be up to such an onerous task.
Anne

Reviewer: gideon (Edit) Rating: May 15, 2006
Pleasantly credible. Nice, well-thought out details. Sustained tone. Stands on its own - but could lead on to more - not necessarily what happens during the following week, but certainly the eventual fate otf the captive (7/10)

Reviewer: ThisGirl (Edit) Rating: May 15, 2006
Wonderful job again, Ms. Gray :)
From character development to plotline, everything is perfectly balanced- nothing missing, nothing overdone.
As before, your story has beautifully clear descriptions of beautiful bondage.
The story leaves you wanting more, but can stand on its own as well.
I agree with Mistress M regarding editing (I'll volunteer, if you like :) )- in fact, I would have rated a 9 if that part did not need revision. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 14, 2006
it was a good read but i really wish you had place story codes withit to one into the story (7/10)

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