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Petulant Pia
Author: Mind Imperator
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(Added on Sep 28, 2005)
(This month 17389 readers) (Total 45359 readers) |
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The inexorable overpowering of an uncertain, reluctant submissive - from her initial recalcitrance, through physical ordeals and mental education, until she finally finds her Utopia in complete and utter subjugation. Written in a literary style with tyrannical, Orwellian overtones. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
renko
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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Excellenent story, mainatains sexual tension even when the interraction is more sadistic - masochistic than mere sexual domination. Chracters are strong and believable, await the next six chapters with great anticiipation (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Allow me to add my voice to the praise. Well written and suspenseful story. Good insight into the Dom. and sub perspective. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
mind_imperator
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2005)
- Thanks. There will be more perspectives on the essence of sexual power later in the story......
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| Reviewer:
Jemmasub
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Exciting and well written, I have never reviewed a story here but you have inspired me to join the forum, Love LOVE LOve the knife play, it turns me on! I can't wait for more.
Jemma (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mind_imperator
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2005)
- Thanks Jemma. Our delicate heroin will again face six inches of sharp, gleaming, uncompromising Sheffield steel towards the end......
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| Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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Sep 29, 2005 |
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i like this style of writing, and this is good. the character development is coming along nicely and when is the next chapter coming? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSgirl
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2005)
- lucky girl to have such a friend, and i hope it helped. i will be watching out for the up comming chapters!
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mind_imperator
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2005)
- Thanks. The character evolves throughout the eight parts of this story. They are already written and I am planning to upload them roughly weekly. By the way, the story was written in an endeavour to help some friends of mine, with one of whom I once spent a very intense long weekend, understand their sexuality.
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msil
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Good start, first/second person voice lets reader get inside the minds of both participants. Looking forward to more. (9/10)
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