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My Friend's Daughter
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 60754 readers) (Total 82396 readers) |
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A woman gets caught admiring her friend's daughter ass and is driven into becoming her willing slave. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MasterG-
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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I enjoyed the concept of the Moms being dominated by the daughter. I continue to enjoy your stories and find them very interesting. Look forward to future stories. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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To all readers: the only way to read this is clicking the text box,selecting all copy and with a paste special (unformatted text) putting it in word.
It will be perfectly readable.
Regarding the story it is quite good and sexy. In fact I regret that some writers just exagerate a little ( refer to licking the floor! ). It does not add anything and brings it slightly down.
Outside this I enjoyed it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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I don't know what it was, but something was lost in the translation between whatever word processing program you used and the final product. I suggest you reformat and repost...I might then reconsider my score. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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terrible layout, you need to make smaller paragraphs like your other stories, this was to hard to read (5/10)
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