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Linda and Miss Helen Author: Nicole Victor
(Added on May 7, 2005) (This month 28580 readers) (Total 69291 readers)
A young woman tired of submitting to an online Mistress decides to make the move to real life submission. This is the story of their developing relationship.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Dododecapod (Edit) Rating: May 21, 2005
This looks like it could be quite good, but at this point I'll never know. Massive blocks of text without pause make my eyes water; I can't read this. Paragraphs exist to break up the action into digestible chunks. If you were to go through and do so here, I'll re-review it.
I just read part two. This is indeed a worthwhile piece, I enjoyed it immensely. You might be a little more imaginative with the punishments, and I'd like to see a little more detailed descriptions, but it's quality stuff. (8/10)

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: May 17, 2005
First things first. Paragraphs don't cost extra. Use them freely. Please.
The action varied widely. Some parts were creative, interesting public humiliation scenes, a particular favorite of mine. However, a large part was mindless beating and ripping apart the sphincter and ass to the point that a trip to the emergency room would be imminent in real life.
The settings were sometimes hokey - a mall with a fetish shop that few know about? A trucker who happened to have 2 sex slaves on hand? (6/10)

Reviewer: ella (Edit) Rating: May 10, 2005
I really enjoyed it. The lack of paragraphs didn't really bother me after a while. The contents however made up for everything else, and that's what counts, i believe.
I will be looking forward to the next part. (9/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: May 8, 2005
paragraphs? there were none!!! I gave up after the fist section (4/10)

Reviewer: BDSM_Tourguide (Edit) Rating: May 8, 2005
I really enjoyed the content of the story. Lots of humiliation is always a good thing, in my opinion. However, I felt that using paragraphs instead of one long, continuous section would have made the story easier to read. Great work, though. Please keep it up. (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 7, 2005
good start, i will adjust the review rating as you continue to add to the post (7/10)

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