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How The Masters Took Control Of My Life
Author: trappedlad
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(Added on Nov 17, 2004)
(This month 20552 readers) (Total 37193 readers) |
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Guy with an interest in bdsm responds to an advert to see if a weekend session can live up to his fantasies - he realises rather quickly that it doesn't and wants out - unfortunately his new Masters have other plans... |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nrjb2
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Jul 17, 2012 |
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Nice story! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hmverrrr
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Dec 16, 2004 |
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I feel out of breath reading this story. Everything happened so fast. Short sentences. Then more detail. Then... and realx. Loved some of the ideas, i love M/m and chastity and i think this a fantasy of trappedlad - all the ideas came out in a whoosh! Would love to see this developed, expanded upon. Description of events and surroundings add loads of atmosphere and imagination for someone that reads a story. Short quick sentences are good when the action needs to be quick, passionate, but it seemed like it was fast paced for the whole story.
(5/10, loved the ideas, but found it hard to read and enjoy) (5/10)
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