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The Trials and Tribulations of Tim
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Oct 19, 2004)
(This month 65318 readers) (Total 129999 readers) |
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In this sequel to "Jill's Wild Weekend", Tim has a parting of the ways with those family members responsible for mistreating his soon to be ex-wife. This results in some radical realignments in relationships, attitudes and sexuality. Plenty of sex, enough violence to satisfy all but the most jaded among us, and demented humor are some of this story's features. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MycroftXXXX
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Jan 23, 2007 |
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A Lex Ludite story with a rating I could actually see one of my stories living up to? That I had to see...but alas, he continues to write well beyond my level. I honestly do not get the aversion early reviewers had to this story. Especially after trying my had at writing, I have nothing but admiration for the way he manages to be a little wry about the entire enterprise while still giving us some nice hot moments. Next to the ten it says "Could compete with published authors", and this is the quality of writing that I would enjoy even if it didn't give me something think on while entertained myself! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2007)
- It's pretty tough to take exception to a rating and review such as this, so I won't even try. It's good to know that there are some people on the site who appreciate a little humor along with the whips, chains and other tools of the trade. By the way this story is about to take a walk on the dark side, but that was always the plan despite the impatience of some reviewers who kind of jumped the gun on this one.
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Nes
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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I am not good at writing these reviews so. it was very well written, I love everything you've done and your easily my favorite writer on this site. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2005)
- Your most generous and very positive review of this story is much appreciated. This one has received some slams, but I think it will turn out to be a lot better than most people ever thought it could be. I hope you will continue to enjoy my stories in the future.
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| Reviewer:
Masterdesire
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May 28, 2005 |
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Lex does it again. Another tour du force. I never felt so alive. If I ever wanted to write it would have to be a story like this. A must read for avid readers.(10/10) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (May 30, 2005)
- Thank you, thank you for your glowing review. I have been utterly devastated by the other reviews this effort received, but decided to hell with them, this story had to go on and so it has. Stay tuned, this one has just gotten started
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chksng19
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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Where did your creativity go, Lex? You've always been good with the writing skills, and with a sensible plot development from start to finish. This "demented humor" is just tired.
Put the poor thing out of it's misery by killing it now. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2004)
- You are entitled to your opinion. I am sorry that demented humor, which is something I pride myself on, is not your cup of tea. I consider this story to be vastly superior in all aspects to the other piece of fluff I recently posted here called Jill's Wild Weekend, which seemed to be received quite differently even though it was totally devoid of any humor, or in fact any skill in writing. If the message I am getting is correct, my skills as a writer are deteriorating rather than improving with time. Perhaps it's time for this scribbler to pack it in.This stuff is fantasy, why are people taking any of it so damned seriously?
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darksource
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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Leaving any type of decent review would be as big a waste of my time as reading the story was.
Where has Lex gone to, I was so used to reading imaginative, creative erotica, now nothing
But hope does exists still (2/10)
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