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A Latin King's Slave
Author: puerto rican slave girl
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(Added on Jun 22, 2004)
(This month 17841 readers) (Total 52845 readers) |
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it is about a 16 year old girl who gets abducted by Latin King gang members. she is treated like a dog then is rape and torture. it has a lot of things to go through in order to get to the sex parts but during the story there will be evets to get your attention. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 18, 2005 |
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The plot was ok but I blieve that the story could hve been better told. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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It never really got to the good stuff, and what was there is poorly written. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jones, Nikka
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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Can't wait for the author to get an editor and improve his/her writing skills. I am all for using written slang when the character's development and the dialog asks for it, but the rest of the narrative should be a bit more readable. I kept on skipping over large chunks of this story, looking for any good parts. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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Can't wait for more chapters to be posted (9/10)
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