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Penny's Mistake
Author: OldBird
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(Added on Jul 4, 2000)
(This month 146215 readers) (Total 188320 readers) |
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She was looking for a master and one night lust. But soon she got all kinds of penetration, humiliation and punishment she can imagine. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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the story was enjoyable to read but as the otherreviewers said and I agree it needs saome work (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Needed some sensuality, and less Brit clap. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
merrymonk
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Aug 8, 2001 |
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good story line, could have been a bit tighter I likedit (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Good style, but too rough and too long. The usual SM stuff in several variations. (4/10)
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