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Woman On Top
Author: ElectricGeisha
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(Added on Jan 14, 2004)
(This month 10483 readers) (Total 22668 readers) |
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Sometimes, a woman just needs to take what she wants. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 24, 2005 |
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Very good story. Interesting approach you had the man use. I do not believe I have ever seen it done quite that way before. The story was very well written and easy to follow. The pace was just right. And besides everybody deserves to get what they want out of life sometimes (smile).
While this story can stand alone, it would be interesting to see what happens next ! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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not a bad story. I'm looking forward to some kind of second chapter. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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Short and bitter sweet, a very nice combination. The writing is direct, with a compact style. The author does a good job of developing the characters using an economy of words. I enjoyed the ending and once more find myself complimenting an author for doing an excellent job of turning the tables so to speak. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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Aside from a few initial grammatical errors, or maybe just typos, "Woman On Top" effectively offers a refreshing POV, replete with backstory and character developement.
Worth reading for all. (7/10)
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