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Jaquery
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Dec 4, 2003)
(This month 17751 readers) (Total 29335 readers) |
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Set in medieval France around 1358 A.D. this story is loosely based upon true history as recorded by noted historians and adapted here for this fictional account. Class rebellion sparked the actual event and here certain details are emphasized. Parts following this first installment are already in developement and should be submitted soon. As always, your reviews are appreciated for this and future chapters. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
(Edit) |
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Dec 7, 2003 |
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What little there was, I enjoyed. Unlike Burger, I appreciated the language employed. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2003)
- Dear M,
Well I guess it's all just a metter of sinmatics, no matter how you say or spell it. Just the same, glad that it worked for you and as already noted to "B" a more comprehensive update has already been submitted and should be posted soon. Thank you for your Review.
F.
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| Reviewer:
burger_01
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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an interesting start, albeit a little heavy on the language, but it does set the scene well. Plus its got lactation forcast in coming chapters. mmm (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2003)
- Dear burger_01,
Thank you for your Review. Part Two has already been submitted and does feature the lactation bit, especially as it applies to the making of French cheese, medieval style.
Sorry if you found the prose to be "a little heavy", but glad that you were able to weed through that mar.
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