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Ali's Bet
Author: Fire-Bird
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(Added on Sep 24, 2003)
(This month 54213 readers) (Total 94831 readers) |
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This story was inspired by Dolcett's drawings "Ali's Bet." |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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Very nice (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
frenchgus
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Oct 31, 2003 |
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I known this Dolcett cartoon ! Why you don't try to write a continue ! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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I had a hard time deciding between 7 and 8. Probably I short-changed you. You exactly captured the feel of a Dolcett story (and, of course, NC does not go with Dolcett). Your very faithfulness to your muse is why I went with the 7, which isn't really fair to you. The blithe acceptance of a horrible death (and the observers changing the rules after she was in no position to argue) is difficult for me. Everyone is just so matter-of-fact! Very Dolcett, but not very believable. Sorry. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Oct 3, 2003 |
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Wow, and all that inspiration from an image. Most impressive! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Good Story, would be better if it was an NC story rather then consenual (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Phoenix
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2003)
- Hi Mkemse. Thanks for the input however I fail to see how an NC story code would make sense in only the first two chapters. (There are six by the way.) Ali was never forced to do anything in this story, she just went along with the flow. I hope you will revise your comment when the remaining four chapters have been posted.
Thanks, Firebird.
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