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Juliette The Super Tramp
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Nov 24, 2002)
(This month 123404 readers) (Total 261655 readers) |
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The continuing adventures of the masochistic super tramp who allows herself to be physically modified by the staff of an exclusive private hospital in hopes of attracting a better class of perverts aimed at using and abusing her. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dunccc
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Jun 14, 2010 |
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Lex's stories always remind me of a quote I once read about the art of Dolcett: 'Like looking into the mouth of hell'.
Unhinged, disturbing, absolutely marvellous. When other stories fail to hit the 'sweet spot', you know you can always fall back on a few chapters of a Luddite masterpiece to get you there.
Lex, you terrify me - in a good way. Keep up the fantastic work! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 14, 2010)
- Two reviews in two days, my cup runneth over and then some! As you well know my works are not for the average reader. I have been told that ever since my first input, so be it. I would have acknowledged your review no matter what it said, but it's a lot more enjoyable when it is so positive. Inputs like this make the day a lot easier to handle even if the story I'm working on isn't turning out the way it should. Many thanks for your encouragement and hoping that my next effort may entertain you as well.
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JimmyJump
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Jun 13, 2010 |
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Disgusting, crude, hard, blunt, over the top, unbalanced and ludicrous are ways to describe "Juliette The Super Tramp".
But so are subtle, tongue-in-cheek, sexy, inventive, refined and with eye for detail.
The outcome is something which needs analyzing by a seasoned psychiatrist.
In any case, we've got a story which moves us along the complete scala of sentiments and feelings.
So, there's no way of telling if this is good or bad, or whatever adjective you can think of to tear apart/praise a story.
Which only proves that it's a damn good tale. Not 'good' enough to warrant a maximum score, me thinks. For that, there's too many switches in style.
Still, Lex Ludite's inventive erotic interludes are a delight to read, even when they sometimes feel as been raked together and knitted to a whole with wool from different animals...
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2010)
- What can I say? Juliette has been tossed around for the better part of some number of years. She is like an orphan in a storm, but she's my orphan and so we soldier on hoping for the best, but preparing for the worse. I would be remiss however if I didn't acknowledge your thoughtful review. As always they are greatly appreciated.
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CoolYin
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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I love this story since a long time and hope to see the end soon.
Give her what she deserves. She deserves salvation and doom and I can't wait to see which of both it will be. Be creative! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2008)
- Your interest in this story and the very generous review and rating you have also given are all greatly appreciated. Salvation or doom; you offer a tough choice. What would you say to something a bit in between and very well deserved by Juliette. The first new chapter will be posted within a week provided Torq has the time to deal with it.
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| Reviewer:
dumboldon
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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Yes...will read MORE than once! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2007)
- I am hoping that the next time you read this one, it will have a few more chapters added. There is nothing like a rating such as yours to act as an incentive to get back to work.
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Kira
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Apr 13, 2006 |
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I just read this story, and i am very happy about that i found it. Specialy the last chapters are my favorite. An Excelent written bodymod part, if You have still more of this ideas please continue. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2006)
- You generous rating is greatly appreciated. As for where this story goes from here, I am not sure for a variety of reasons. Hopefully the muse will give me a hint in the near future.
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mkemse
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Aug 24, 2005 |
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not sure i have missed many if any of your stories, this i know, you are conistant and good (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Your very generous review is much appreciated. This little effort is one of my favorites, and there are many twists and turns to go before it's done.
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pejanon
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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While the smoke from the machine fire of the opening chapters clears this story-ship enters more subdued waters. (Subdued? Wrong word - nothing subdued about Lex Ludite.) The smoke was quite interesting - with this author a step from kinky to awesomely absurd is indeed a small one. (TWELVE garters? " a three quart enema of glycerin, double-boiled coffee including the grounds, and a trace of some kind of paint remover"?) The overkill syndrome is occasionally irritating but I feel it is meant more as a mood setter and a character moulder than something 'real'.
Second part introduces interesting F/f relationships and more emotional involvement between and towards the characters. I'm inclined to fall in love with Julliete.
I hope the story develops more along these lines. I'm 100% certain that Lex Ludite will deliver the usual "hot & nasty" madness and that the story will gather up the speed - but perhaps not up to that staccato silent-movies-like action that is more funny than hot.
PS. Please no TWELVE tits, ok?
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2005)
- My thanks for a simply tremendous review of this truly bizarre effort that will get more insane as we go along. I hope you meant "molder" instead of "moulder". The twelve garters was my tribute to those with that particular fetish, and, as you so properly noted, the content of the enema was deliberately skewed to the unbelievable in the interests of stimulating the readers' reaction to all of this insanity. I really like your description of the story as being sometimes almost like a silent film. You are dead-on, and it makes me think of some portions of one of my other stories that use a reel that plays out in the protagonist's mind every time things get extremely bizarre. Be advised that there are three more chapters curently aging in my hard drive that I am quite pleased with even if I did write them.
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| Reviewer:
Masterdesire
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Interesting to say the least. I am wondering and pondering whats next. Excellent writing and format.Can't wait to see how she is fixed up, and what will be her lot. (9/10) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jun 4, 2005)
- Your comments and generous rating are much appreciated. This one has the reins in its teeth and is taking me to places I haven't been in a very long time. I do hope you enjoy her meetings with nurses Likre and Crocet, not to mention Dimples and Dumpling. What started out as a novella is rapidly morphing into an epic.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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May 16, 2005 |
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Interesting. After the first six chapters, I am curious to see what is in store for the heroine next. Good story! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (May 16, 2005)
- Your positive review is very much appreciated. Like many of my efforts, this BDSM waif languished for a long time while I sought a good home for her. It looks like Juliette is no longer an orphan. Two more chapters are in final editing and should be out within a month.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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When I first opened this story I groaned, like a lot of readers I usually back click when I see a first/second person story, but this one in my opinion, is an exception and exceptionally good.
Its different too, a little like a porno version of Bridget Jones's Diary I guess. I stopped reading the beginning of chapter four, but that was just simply because where it was heading wasn't my cup of tea. It just got too dark for my light tastes. That's not to say others won't thoroughly enjoy it.
Overall, its certainly worth a look. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mskneeler
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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As I myself am lesbian sub, I naturally very much enjoyed the latter sections of the story. I would be thrilled to see this story continue to where she tends to become totally used/abused by perfect femal strangers as well as young female relatives! Any F/F story that contains one woman being forced to endure sacraligous punishments and unending oral pleasing of other women, is to me a story to be treasured; most especially if the one enduring all this harshness is never allowed an orgasm herself but teased to the very brink of them OFTEN!
neenee (Janeen Marie O'Brien)
binkyboom@hotmail.com (7/10)
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