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    Cumbag at the Rat Bar
    
    Author: Steve Dema
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    (Added on Oct 22, 2002)
            (This month 60648 readers) (Total 73397 readers) | 
   
   
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    Cumbag's adventure in the bar for the "river rats", men who lived and worked on the river boats out of Memphis. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Eric Boss
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    Jan 27, 2008 | 
   
   
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        The two bad reviews here are complete nonsense, and demonstrated the difficulties of the review system on this site.  Why are they reviewing a piece of work so negatively when it simply isn't to their taste?  "Cumbag at the Rat Bar" is a delicious short fuck essay exploring male domination and contempt of the cunt, a universal aphrodisiac as far as I am concerned.  He is a brilliant author and his other stories are even better. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    oidMe
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    Dec 8, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Good one! (9/10) 
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    Oct 31, 2002 | 
   
   
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        Very disappointing.  The author 'can' write -- the spelling and syntax are average or better.  I can understand the appeal of sex.  And I can understand the appeal of (fantasy) violence.  But I don't understand the appeal of degradation; and I don't understand why this story was written. (3/10) 
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    ozara
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    Oct 24, 2002 | 
   
   
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        it is poorly written...i admire the attempt, but the attempt failed miserably  (2/10) 
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